Early 2004
Would it be wrong to say I don’t think it’s my best work?
Look here!
This is useless,
Forced and pretentious,
And the message too plain for my face.
Look here!
Too much rhythm,
And rhyme without reason
No flow to the meter, no passion or grace.
And here!
This is something,
A sparkle at least
It must be drawn out, though: more impact, more soul.
But no,
It is dreadful.
This never will do.
The problem is not with the parts but the whole.
Oh this?
This is nothing.
Just something I wrote.
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